“My Visit With God” is a poem that came quickly to me through the brief and unexpected return of my Muse on Thursday night last, yes, it is the same Muse who has been about as hard to find as Bob Seger’s “Sunspot Baby”* for around the past year or so. But I digress, the poem itself, came out of the blue and flowed like it had already been written and stored somewhere in the back of my mind. It covers a few different aspects of our relationship with God and provides a bit of innuendo, which I think/hope will set at least, some of us to thinking.
Please enjoy it and comment if you’d like,
Have a great and safe weekend,
Jake.
My Visit With God
I visited with God last night
without intent or invitation
but He welcomed me with open arms
as if He understood my situation,
I said; “Lord, I am a simple man
and weak in mind and spirit,
my soul is in a fragile state
and my faith resides right near it.”
He looked at me and smiled wide
and said; “My Son you’re not alone,
so many of My children
have wandered far from home.”
I asked; “Then why, do You love us still,
when we’ve turned our backs on You?”
He looked at me in bewilderment
and asked; “What should a father do?”
“Should I disown you, one and all
and thereby damn My own creations,
or merely wait until your final hour
and then enjoy your lamentations?”
“You see, My prodigals will return to Me
as the sands of time run out
and the atheist and agnostic too,
shall then shed their cloak of doubt!”
Jack Downing
Sept. 2015
* Sunspot Baby is a rousing song performed by Bob Seger (and the Silver Bullet Band?) which has become a “Classic” along with so many, make that, most of his songs throughout his extensive and very successful career.
Jake.
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WOW Very powerful. Thanks, Jack
Thank you Mary. I believe there is always hope for all of us sinners as long as we keep even the most tenuous of holds, on the tiniest of threads, attached to the very last row, on the hem of His robe. I’m hanging by that thread as it is. Maybe that’s the real message of:”Hang in there baby”. lol.
Wonderful Jake! Love you my friend and God bless!
Thanks so much loopy that means a lot to me. May God bless you and yours as well. Have a great weekend.
By far your best work!!!!
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Wow really? Thanks honey, I love you. Be careful and GO PATS!!
Blessings to you and yours.
Thank you Carl and may I extend the same to you and your beautiful family as well.
Don’t you love when a poem falls together as if already written? This is simply a lovely poem of blessing, hope and faithfulness, Jake.
Thank you Audrey. It is as if they are planted somewhere in the recesses of the mind and are just waiting to be harvested.
Love it and would like to discuss further with you. Love you
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