Less I Am Than They

     Saturday morning, and I’m taking it easy today. Short and sweet it is. I have no thoughts currently running through the subway station of my mind, therefore here is a quick read for you all.

     Have a satisfying Saturday,


Less I Am Than They

I see the mountain,

and it humbles me.


I respect the ocean,

but I fear the sea.


Then I watch the river,

flowing to be free.


And I know that they are all,

so much more than me.


Jack Downing

Aug. 2009

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Hearth and Health are wonderful things and if you're without either such sorrow that brings So I cannot express enough thanks to my Lord and to my family and friends for the support you afford! ~Jack Downing~
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10 Responses to Less I Am Than They

  1. Michael says:

    Wow ……… what a fresh layout today. Really nice Jack. How was Veterans Day for you? Warmest Regards, Michael.

    • My veteran’s day was very nice thank you Michael, I am so glad that you liked the “layout” today, because a day ishow long it took me to do it. “Old and slow is the way to go.” lol My wish for you is for serenity, if but foronly one day. (the day of your choosing) Jake.

  2. adeeyoyo says:

    Wonderful poem, Jack. I loved the photographs too!

    • Thanks Denise, you have no idea what it takes for this “techno weinie” to figure out how to get the pics from one place to the other. Then to have to keep moving.. a. the text or.. b. the pictures to get them lined up correctly. After all ofthat I needed a fewbeers…But in retrospect, perhaps if I hadn’t had a few beersbefore I started, then… Ah, who cares, think I’ll have another!! lol

  3. Beth Ann says:

    Hey I love it!!! And the photographs were fabulous to go along with the short selection!!! Happy Saturday!

  4. In your own way Jack, you are much more than them all.

  5. mchogarty@aol.com says:

    Had another “bonus” saturday at work and your words inspired me tonight….tx Jack

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