Do you have that deep down, can’t get enough, craving for sweets? You know, candy, brownies, cake or chocolate in any form. I personally am not a big sweets person (or a big sweet person, some might say) but if I were, these would be my wishes..
Though to me, you my friends, are all the sweets I need,
Jake.
Sweet Tooth
When I leave this world,
for another spot,
I hope it’s not too cold,
and I hope, it’s not too hot,
and there’s just, two other things,
that I’d love a lot,
a great big candy mountain,
and teeth, that will not rot.
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Dec. 2011
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lovely write
Thank you so much. It seems that I may have been a bit untruthful, as lately I have been having ice cream cravings a few times a week..Please come back again.
I can soooo much relate to this!
I’ll bet you’re a sweetie, anyway..
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Goodnight, sleep tight, don’t let the bed bugs bite, especially, not in Mrs. Downing sight = ) I don’t know if it is sweet enough, but thats my concluding message to you for the day = ) alooooooha = )
I think it is very sweet, and I hope your day is full of sunshine and joy.